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Confessions of the Flower

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Confessions of the Flower
Joey S.

Built from a love like Carnations
Flowers of the forever more
For what it lacks, makes up for with patients
From experience in the time of yore
With strings of the marble heart played
A future set swift into motion
Knelt to one knee and prayed
To stay sturdy to the one true devotion
A promise to one’s own essence
With the ring on the fingers tips
Set in front of your luminescence
Mentality fallen into the eclipse
To ask of you this certain question   
Means to drop the virgin’s clothes  
And make a sincere confession
To let every sensitive truth expose
Make known the intentions of the Tulip
A symbol of the your splendor
With confidence from a potent julep
It is my heart that I surrender
Ok Davey doesn't know this yet, but of course will know as soon as he reads this, that I wrote a poem when I was preparing to propose to him. This of course is it.

Um words or frazes you might not understand

Yore: Time that has elapsed

Flowers of the forever more: Carnations are flowers that last a really long time, and the means in that our love will as well.

With strings of the marble heart played: A heart that has been polished to feel nothing, and when he plays it, he's slowly bring life back to it.

With the ring on the fingers tips: this is when I was hoping he's figure out I was proposeing (if i ever had gotten the chance to do it that way)

To ask of you this certain question: The big question people!! Will you marry me!

Means to drop the virgin’s clothes: Well when a person has sex for the first time it alway a really big step..get it?

Make known the intentions of the Tulip: The Tulip is a symbol of the perfect love.

With confidence from a potent julep: It's a whiskey mix drink over ice.
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Trancewitch's avatar
Ok Joey...Wow...
Have I mentioned that Im completey in love with you? Cuz I am. And always will be.
This is more perfect than anything Ive ever had done for me...Im sorry D let things loose and told me...But I love you, and Im very happy to be yours forevermore.
This was written beautifully and with a lot of thought, its easy to see that. Its every word so purposeful, so perfect, it says so much about you and about how you feel for me. Im a very blessed boy indeed.
But about that julep...you didnt really need the liquid courage did you Kitten? I thought I had made it rather obvious what my intentions were, lol.
I love you Joey.
I cant wait for the day when you slide the ring onto my finger.
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